CHANGE - Alternative Ending

After veiwing our footage, Keeley and I decided that our film seemed a little boring and didnt contain a lot of footage that would really capture and entice the audience.

After thinking on it we decided to film an alternate ending in which our protagonist returns home to find a dead body in her living room, (which later in the film we find out is her Father.) We thought this was a good idea as it added a shocking factor as the audience would not expect this to occur.

This is our alternative ending in storyboard form which I created on the website ToonDoos -

The only problem that this new storyline brings is that it shifts the genre and style from being Realistic / Drama, to being realistic thriller - therefore we will need to reaserch some more films of this genre.